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My entry for the "lost in another world" contest [link]

Now I do realize there isn't much of a visual contrast and I probably botched the contest requirements completely, but it was way too much fun doing. Perhaps I will be forgiven, perhaps! I've always loved to fly during the night, because from up high the cities and highways and smaller towns look like starbelts and tiny colorful universes and constellations of their own. One of the most beautiful sights in my books. So my feeble attempt at contrast was to compare a night sky to the sea of lights that are our cities... and now that I wrote it down I laughed a bit. Ah well! Was fun, and I hope the contest hosts will like the piece.

Story as follows:
"Two stars in flight, passing over the deep blue sky. They stop mesmerized gazing down at the sea of lights that is the earth during it's darker hours. Before the sun make's it's full rounds the pair descends to explore this man made starry sky resting on top and inside stone and steel. Settling on a rooftop engaged in discovery, few of their brethren follow them. The great bear hovering over the due's heads while Pegasus gallops above them all"

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Thank you for bothering!

(oh, and the sleep deprived me saved this in a tad worse quality than intended. Think I'll post the due separately, because most of the details just die out here...I'm so bad at backgrounds, ungh)
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Mallin käyttäminen näkyy näissä selkeästi. Molempien naisten mittasuhteet ja ruumiin asennot toimivat paljon paremmin kuin kuvissasi, joissa ei ole ollut refejä.

Arvostan kuitenkin eniten tässä kuvassa noita kaupungin valoja. Ne ikäänkuin pomppaa ulos kuvasta, vähän niinkuin hyvässä yöllisessä värivalokuvassa.

Kaupungin valojen lisäksi kuvassa ehdottomasti hyvää on värimaailma. Ainakin minulle selkeä vahvuutesi on värien ja niiden yhteensopivuuden ymmärtäminen. Tässä kuvassa se tulee selkeästi esille. Vaikka tämän kuvan kanssa voi olla tietoinen valinta latistaa perspektiiviä, voisi yleisesti sitä havainnollistaa vielä enemmän hajavalon ja värien intensiteetin avulla.

And I'd like to add that 100 words may sound like a good limit if you write in English. Our lovely language tends to use one word whereas the lingua franca of the internets uses seven.